Essay Revision Materials

This week we are continuing our work on essays. You are all at different places in the revision process. Some of you need to "get back to basics" and begin again (don't fret, we've all been there!). Others need to reorganize what you have and find new or better pieces of evidence. Some have just minor grammatical issues to correct. My goal is that all of you improve your writing with this essay so everyone must turn in a revision.


Here are some materials for reference:

Guide to complete sentences & capitalization

Reminders for Essay Organization

Guide to my edits

Passive Voice: Go through THIS slideshow